Memory Block

My group for writing are  the TRUMPETS.
At the moment we are writing memory blocks.
A memory block is a piece of writing that you write words on such as JUMPING.
And then you write down some sentences about the word.
My memory block is about the Auckland sky tower.
My goal for next week is to fix up the mistakes my teacher showed me and make my memory block really good.

Sky tower

humongous shape

glass window

elevator

Humongous shape

I walk down the pavement and look up at the sky tower.

Its cylinder  shape is enough to make me  feel giddy to the head

Sky Tower

I walk through the sky towers  rectangular doors. Inside are rectangular cases full of comics,books and Sky Tower products.

Elevator

I walk over to a few metal square  shapes I  press a button and step into the elevator.

I look at the elevators  glass floor and just about fall over in fright at the long cylinder metal pipes at the  side off a long drop just like the drop emperor palpatine is thrown over in  return of the Jedi.

Glass window

I arrive at the Sky Tower and walk around an oval shape at the top of the Sky Tower.

I look down at my feet and just about scream at the square glass window I'm standing on.

I see the city,cars,people,buildings all stretched out below me like a map.

They all look like ants.